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FireStripe

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Well, this is one of my Warrior Cats OCs, FireStripe. Here he is reciveing a dream about an even of the future, an event I'm not going to metion cuz of da SPOILAHS.
But anyhow...
FIRESTRIPE FTW AND YOU FREAKING KNOW IIITTTT
Yes, I have opened critiques, but there IS something I don't want you to mention.
1!: How the lines are thicker near the top of his his head. I know about that.
The anatomy I need help improving though :/

Edit: why did this reapear in my gallery whEN I UPDATED THE FACT I DIDN'T WANT CRITIQUES I NEVER ASKED FOR THIS
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:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Good lord, no.

Please, when you draw, look at an actual picture.

First, the tail is weird.

Ears are too big.

Eyes are huge.

Don't, just don't, draw HUGE hair.

The shading is alright, but sorta weird.

Lines are poor and shaky.

Coloring isnt so good.

Just... No. No. No.

You really need practice.

Space filler:

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Bai.